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Ballads, Blues and Rock-n-Roll lyrics critique country/ southern rock

by Lonnie
(N.E. Louisana)


Ballads, Blues and Rock-N-Roll

I woke with the night before pounding in my head
A empty bottle of tequila on the floor by my bed
Felt around on the night stand for my cigarettes
And I know before looking the reflection in the mirrors a mess
But I guess that’s what you get when you live a life like mine
Chasing honky-tonk music and neon signs
Living your life to the rhythm of the road
And everywhere your headed you know you've been there before

Ballads, blues and rock n roll
It doesn’t make up a very good life anymore
Playing the music by the beat way down in my soul
Ballads, blues and rock n roll

Lord it's been a long time since I've been home
I don't remember anymore where I come from
Probably nothing left to go home to
But the whine of this engine sings away my blues

Ballads, blues and rock n roll
It doesn’t make up a very good life anymore
Playing the music by the beat way down in my soul
Ballads, blues and rock n roll




Ballads and blues and rock n roll
It don't make up for a very good life anymore
Playing my music by the beat way down in my soul
Is ballads and blues and rock n roll
Ballads and blues and rock n roll

Thursday, July 17, 2008 Lonnie Welch
silver eagle music




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Ballads, Blues and Rock-n-Roll lyrics critique country/ southern rock

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Aug 19, 2009
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I like it
by: Charlie

very good I like the story I like the flow.I had a little trouble getting the rythem with out hearing the music. Very Nice Keep iyt up.

Sep 22, 2009
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nice
by: Anonymous

good flow, and image

Oct 06, 2009
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I really like the title of the song
by: Anonymous GA Girl

I think it is pretty good but I had a hard time feeling it. Seems like the song would make more since to musicians than to the general public. But hey, Im no expert. This is just my opinion. Keep writing. Dig a little deeper.

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