Bad dream. lyrics critique. rock song.

by Sarah
(NSW Australia)

you promised your heart to me,
you promised your smile and shining eyes.
you promised you would pretect me.
but only if it wasnt a dream
only if it wasnt me.


i got lost in your eyes.
thinking it would be a perfect life.
a new begginging ,
a new start.
i thought i would be happy,
be smiling.
be enjoying life from now on.
but only if it wasnt a dream.
only if it wasnt all pretending to be


you promised your heart to me,
you promised your smile and shining eyes.
you promised you would pretect me.
but only if it wasnt a dream
only if it wasnt me.

i hoped that you'd come back for me,
ever time you left my heart
everytime you left the room.
i started crying.
when i found out.
what happenend to you.
you left me .
you left your family.
you left. dead. no longer to be
nothing more than a dream


you promised your heart to me,
you promised your smile and shining eyes.
you promised you would pretect me.
but only if it wasnt a dream
only if it wasnt me.


my heart started pumping
faster than it ever could be.
i was running.
running away. where i first thought you could be.
i wished and wished.
then i woke up to nothing but a dream.


you promised your heart to me,
you promised your smile and shining eyes.
you promised you would pretect me.
but only if it wasnt a dream
only if it wasnt me.
you promised your heart to me,
you promised your smile and shining eyes.
you promised you would pretect me.
but only if it wasnt a dream
only if it wasnt me.


ive been living life in hell.
and now ive gotten in too deep.
my years and years are getting worse. my heart is disintergrating.
and soon there would be nothing left of me.
coz i found out. what was a dream.
was ending up to be all real.
i just want to be with you.
but it aint ever coming real


my dreams are real.
my heart isnt even here.
my life is burning, into a scar that wont heal.
i cant change a thing. untill i forget everything.
and forget the words that you said to me








dont die on mee..