"Back where is all started" critique-Hardcore/pop song

by Schloreal Hytower
(myrtle Beach,South Carolina,United States)

(chant)
Dont turn your back on me!You'll regret this more then you know!

(Verse 1)
Black eyes,rid fist,and i was told to surrender,
but did you think i'd come this far,to give up without a fight,
You were wrong,i was riht,
just like old times,with no future in sight.

(chours)
THis time i'll make you remember,
who got you through all the smoke and the embers,
im back again,and i aim to win,
and i wanna say,i remember my friends

(verse 2)
No more faking,this city is ours for the taking,
No more lies,look me in the eyes,
Do you,remember me?!
Are friends,or are we enemies?!
Come on tell me what i want to hear,
Cause we've been changing so much,in the past years,
And you ask me why am i here.

(chours)

(breakdown)
Dont forget me!
Dont forget us!
We fought our way through this town...!
And were not going down now
Without a fight!

(outro)
my friends means the world to me!
My friends are my family!
fight fight fight fight
Dont turn your back on me!