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Back to Reality Lyrics Critique - Country Song

by Kristyn
(WV)

I know it's kinda long, but I hear it's good... so tell me watcha think :)


Back to Reality

Everything was perfect
Everything was how it should be
My whole world was about you and me
Now my life is falling
Apart one step at a time
It seems just yesterday you and I were

Living our real-life fairytale
Our dream come true that everyone else
Wants so bad
But they can?t have it
We?re taking our love and going wild
Living our lives with a smile
On our faces, to strange new places
But everything had to end
Now we?re hardly even friends
It wasn?t much, but it was enough
To send me, spiraling
Bak to reality
Oh yeah back to reality

It was a love gone wrong
A bad ending no one saw
Cause my world was about you and me
Now I count the days
Since we parted
Seems just yesterday you and I just started

Living our real-life fairytale
Our dream come true that everyone else
Wants so bad
But they can?t have it
We?re taking our love and going wild
Living our lives with a smile
On our faces, to strange new places
But everything had to end
Now we?re hardly even friends
It wasn?t much, but it was enough
To send me, spiraling
Bak to reality
Oh yeah back to reality

Oh yeah

I know I said I wanted
Nothing to do with you
And with the truth coming out
I miss you oh
And I miss

Living our real-life fairytale
Our dream come true that everyone else
Wants so bad
But they can?t have it
We?re taking our love and going wild
Living our lives with a smile
On our faces, to strange new places
But everything had to end
Now we?re hardly even friends
It wasn?t much, but it was enough
To send me, spiraling
Bak to reality
Oh
It wasn?t much, but it was enough
To send me, stumbling
Back to reality

Oh, oh
Back to reality

Oh yeah




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:) !
by: Dannie M.

i love this
YOU SHOULD SEND IT TO THEE PUBLISHIN SIGHT

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