Back To My Home Lyrics Critique

by Paige
(USA)

First song I ever wrote, when I was 12... So don't expect it to be gold. :) It is a slower song with a simple rhythm and notes.

1- I saw you, in the light. And I stared at you, because you shined so bright. And when you smiled at me, I just.. have to say....

Bridge- I can't believe you're standin here, how can it be that you're so near me.? How can it be..? How can it be..?

Chorus- When my world was crashing down, you were there to help me through, you lead me. Back to my home... Back to my home... Back to my home...

2- I saw you sitting there.. and I thought about.. all the thing that we could share. So I take a breath, of fresh air. And start to walk.., over there, over there! Next to you.

Bridge- I can't belive you're standing here, how can it be that you're so near me.? How can it be..? How can it be..?

Chorus- When my world was crashing down, you were there to help me through, you lead me. Back to my home... Back to my home... Back to my home...

3- I saw you in the light, and I stared at you, because you glowed so bright. So I take a breath of fresh air, and start to walk, over there, over there, next to you...