army of one -lyrics critique

by angel

army of one
fighting for my only true love
army of one
Fightin for my only true love
I miss u soo
But I aint givin up

Why chu go
Left me feelin so alone
U say were done for
But I felt we barely even begun
Holdin my head up high
Reaching for the stars
Wit u beside me
It was like I already won

Army of one
Fightin for my only true love
Hes gone away
But the feelin is still strong
Army of one
Fightin for my only true love
I miss u soo
But I aint givin up

Did chu catch that face
That scarred old lonely face
Walkin past u
On the road to her own redemption
Wells she me
And Im done fightin
For the things
I know
I know
I know
That I know
Are gone

Army of one
Ending this war of no lovee
Hes gone away
and the feelin is no longer strong
army of one
ending this war of no lovee
I still miss chu so
But I wouldn’t call it givin up

Im my own army of one
Theres only one difference this time
Time im fightin
For myself
And not a love that died


well these are jus some lyrics i was playin round wit
plz help me improve them