Apparition lyrics critique- Acoustic Metal

by Rune
(Modesto, CA)

Tell me what you think

Verse 1
I open up my eyes
I see the world in a whole new way
I'm crying deep inside
It's a brand new day and the skys are grey

verse 2
Appatition knows my fears
He whispers in my ear
His message is so clear
I run but I can't get away

Chorus
Gotta break the chains that hold me down
Distorting the truth and keeping me bound
Gotta fight to hold the higher ground
Gotta break free from its death grip

Apparition

Verse 3
I'm feeling all alone
A cold sweats pouring down my face
I shiver to the bone
My vision starts to fade away

Verse 4
I'm burning deep inside
And feeling so alive
Apparition will survive
Cause my hunger sets him free again

Chorus
Gotta break the chains that hold me down
Distorting the truth and keeping me bound
Gotta fight to hold the higher ground
Gotta break free from its death grip

Apparition