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"another goodbye" - Genre: Pop -Lyrics Critique

by Irony of White
(Denmark)

Please leave, or i fall in love with you,
And I know, thats not, what you would like me to.

But i really like you to stay
But you know how awkward it is next day.

I wish we could kiss, I wish you would miss
I wish I could hold, your hand when it's cold.
But we split apart, a least one brooken heart.
Just another friendly goodbye.

"This is a popsong in an up-beat tempo. This is first sketch of the chorus".




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Apr 11, 2009
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Good Talent!!!
by: Anonymous

You are very talented and I believe you will be very successful in the music industry!

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