Angry Jesus - Post Grunge - Alt. Metal

by Austin Bercaw
(wesley chapel, florida, usa)

The mood is kind of like...A guy is getting frustrated with things and every time he gets down on life he turns to Jesus/God but every time he feels let down.I feel its going to be a hard song but rather slow, with aggressive vocals.

Any help would be great. Feel free to submit tips even if it completely changes the structure as long as the emotion/message stay intact

Angry Jesus
When I'm talkin to you it doesn't feel right
I wish you'd shine me your light
In the dark of the night
You shit on me when I seem faithless
Staring right through me when I am faceless

Can you save me from this
Angry Jesus

These words of mine fall on deaf ears
I've been wasting my time all these years
For forgiveness I'll pray but nothing changes anyway
For love I'll pray but you don't listen anyway

The weight of the world is killin you lord
Golden crown of thorns cut me open, leave me torn
You expect us all to believe
In this empty book you leave
You shit on me when I seem faithless
You strike me down when I feel graceless

Can you save me from this
Angry Jesus

These words of mine fall on deaf ears
You been wastin my time all these years
For forgiveness I'll pray but nothin' changes anyway
For love I'll pray but you won't listen anyway

Beatin till I concede into believing in their creed
Every single day is another damn sin
And until you decide to come around again
You'll shit on me when I seem faithless
You'll strike me down when I feel graceless

Can you save us from this
Angry Jesus

These words of mine fall on deaf ears
You been wastin my time all of these years
For forgiveness I'll pray but nothin' changes anyway
For love I'll pray but you won't listen anyway