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angel in my eyes, lyric critique- country

by marshall howard
(dallas, ga, us)

"angel in my eyes"

i was a young man from a small country town
living out on my own
and you came along in the blink of an eye
out of the ashes of love
and when i looked into your eyes
i saw an angels face
i knew then that my whole world had gone and changed

cause your an angel
angel in my eyes
brighting the days of my life
when i see you standing there
my day is filled with love and care
like no one else had done before
your an angel in my eyes

each day passing
feelings still going strong
you got the promus of my love
ill hold you in my arms
kiss you every night
thanking god
for what i've got

cause your an angel
angel in my eyes
brighting the days of my life
when i see you standing there
my day is filled with love and care
like no one eles had done before
your an angel in my eyes




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angel in my eyes, lyric critique- country

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Oct 18, 2011
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Not a bad write...
by: David L

As a lyric it has some poetic potential. Were I you I'd pay more attention to spelling, capitalization and general editing. The idea is a good one, it flows well and holds the readers interest. Without hearing it set to music it's difficult to critique its worthiness.

Good luck and happy trails.

Oct 21, 2011
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hot
by: lakeisha murry

it was hot i like it

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