AndyL - Savannah Falls. Critique. Please comment.

by AndyL
(uk)

Chorus. Savannah falls by saphires light.
Like rainfall a sparkling delight.
Savannahs' hot n travelling light.
Swaying as the train takes flight.

Savannahs' not out 2 make it right.
When the sleeper arrives in the city 2night.

Not gonna b taken for a fool.
Doesn't live where a hearbreak can rule.

So Savannahs' hot n travelling light.
Swaying as the train takes flight.
Fleeing like a firefly form the dawns light.
Savannahs' escaping seeking respite.

Savannahs cool.
For hear the cities just a tool.

Her hearts hardened not seeking 2b pardoned

With a heart like a lock.
If the key doesn't fit she'll mock.

Chorus.

Savannahs' gonna get it right.
As she races through the subways under artificial light.
Aint gonna b taken for a fool.
She belongs 2 know 1 at all.

Flashing a smile she hails a cab.
The drivers sickly sweet, and his conversations drab.

Chorus.

Savannahs' hot - she's cetainly not cool.
She's always been able 2 make em drawl.
Ordering the driver to stop at the curb.
He's begun 2 disturb.
Watching her closely and taking delight. But4 Savannah the company just wasnt right.

Savannah flees into dawns early light.

Chorus.

Another sunrise will set Savannah alight. Like the desert she'll blaze into life.
She's the sweet rain that will ease the deserts parched strife.

Chorus.

Savannahs as unruly as hell.
And she's come to dwell in this city of strife.

Savannah like a desert after rainfall is gonna erupt into life.