[?] Subscribe To This Site

XML RSS
Add to Google
Add to My Yahoo!
Add to My MSN
Subscribe with Bloglines

Home
Blog
How To Write Song
Question of Week
Songwriting Tips
Writing Lyrics
Songwriting
Building a Studio
Recommendations
Songwriting Books
Discussion Forums
About Me
Lyrics Critique
Recording
Record Deals
Music Business
Software
Music Software
Publishing
Personal Freedom
Recording Studios
Free Newsletter
Who Wrote Song
About This Site
Contact
Privacy Policy

AndyL - Passion Flower Kisses Lyric Critique- Please comment

by AndyL
(uk)

Eyes amorous like the sea, not devoid of sensuality. Smile adorned like an accolade laid. Lips sweet like fire in the shade.

Whispered kisses caught in the frown of a clown. Any time apart leads to breaking dowmn.

In the devil made you laugh flow of the afterglow, what have any of us got 2 show. Incapabe of loving perhaps we'll never know.

Except when we get caught in the glow. Sensually depraved. Can this be allayed. Can we be saved.

Living n dieing.
Caring n crying.
Suicide jumpers with a fear of flying.
I aint ever gonna be accused of lying.

A rapid descent your life insurance is gonna get spent.

In your descent to the fear gravities affect is becoming clear.

Every minute of our time. As we caress and silently mime, mouthing PASSION FLOWER KISSES growing sweet like reminisces.

Lying under an electric light bulb sun. Bright like a Santa Fei night. Playing Russian roullette with a gun.

So you've been tailored to stun. If its gonna be done. B the 1........

Comments for
AndyL - Passion Flower Kisses Lyric Critique- Please comment

Average Rating starstarstarstarstar

Click here to add your own comments

Dec 12, 2008
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Sweet
by: Amber

This is really nice.
It is so pleasant to sing to it.=)

May 31, 2009
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Neat
by: ~RES~

You did a great job with being descriptive and painting a picture. I love the title! A little structure would help the flow a lot. Just take the same words and organize them a little more so that they're divided into verses.
Nice job, overall.
~RES~

Jun 04, 2009
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Awesome
by: Gage Helms

Woah, That was incredible!

Nice writing.

ROCK ON!

Jun 16, 2009
Rating
starstarstar
Cool
by: Maia

Cool song

Click here to add your own comments


footer for songwriting page