AndyL - Passion Flower Kisses Lyric Critique- Please comment

by AndyL
(uk)

Eyes amorous like the sea, not devoid of sensuality. Smile adorned like an accolade laid. Lips sweet like fire in the shade.

Whispered kisses caught in the frown of a clown. Any time apart leads to breaking dowmn.

In the devil made you laugh flow of the afterglow, what have any of us got 2 show. Incapabe of loving perhaps we'll never know.

Except when we get caught in the glow. Sensually depraved. Can this be allayed. Can we be saved.

Living n dieing.
Caring n crying.
Suicide jumpers with a fear of flying.
I aint ever gonna be accused of lying.

A rapid descent your life insurance is gonna get spent.

In your descent to the fear gravities affect is becoming clear.

Every minute of our time. As we caress and silently mime, mouthing PASSION FLOWER KISSES growing sweet like reminisces.

Lying under an electric light bulb sun. Bright like a Santa Fei night. Playing Russian roullette with a gun.

So you've been tailored to stun. If its gonna be done. B the 1........