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AndyL - Lyrics Critique - Dance/Rock

by ANDY
(UK)

chorus. Fooling never mind, we're 2 of a kind, we're sextastic funkers entwined.

Life in this town aint ever gonna be the same, since the hardcore funkers declared your a shame.

But its their loss and our gain, cause u aint ever gonna be plain.

chorus.

Your not 2 blame u just never learnt 2 refrain. By the strobe lights glow u phase in and out, no need to betray it with a shout, cause we all know what its about.

chorus.

When 2 souls become aligned, 2 bodies become one and the same kind. Thats how dance affairs are sposed 2 be designed. Enwrapped 2gether and perfectly refined. Its fantismal when we're entwined, but its dismal how this affairs defined.

Together free but apart confined.

chorus.

Music n vibe gonna send u outta your mind. We were highstrung but we're gonna unwind. This feelin aint ever been unkind, break outta the grind, and be sextastic funkers entwined.

Fooling never mind we're 2 of a kind were sextasic funkers entwined.

Its fantismal when we're entwined but its dismal how our dance affairs defined.

chorus




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AndyL - Lyrics Critique - Dance/Rock

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Dec 15, 2008
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Interesting.
by: Anonymous

Are you AndyL UK who wrote Freefalling??

Jan 05, 2011
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Cool.
by: Anonymous

Not sure the rhythm lines up well with some lines, but if you can make it work with whatever the music sounds like, that's all that matters.

I like the phrase "sextastic funkers". That's pretty awesome.

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