AndyL - Freefalling. Critique. Please comment.

by AndyL
(UK)

Freefalling throught this dream.
Can't tell up from down.
Why are you still hanging around.
Your not even dressed in the theme.
If your not in a life jacket you'll drown.
Then again in your Christian Dior you always astound.

Travels of the heart.
This towns the movie screen.
You've got the starring part

Chorus. Devilishly beguiling.
Like a silent movie star smiling.
Even your 0898 number the angels r dialling.

But you've got surround sound to astound.
And your not in black and white you've got H.D. to set u alight.

If u were'nt a walking billboard poster, well baby I might.

Chorus.

A movie picture is captivity enravelled.
Love is like a known road untravelled.
Only in silence 2gether is our theme unravelled.

Chorus.

It's a shame our hearts declared r loves a warfare state.
Funny how lifes idiosynchracies equate.

When your together add each moment up.
When your longing to escape 4 ever.
How do u view your devils cup?
Half empty or half full up!

Chorus.