Already gone? lyrics critique...

by Julie
(Nashville, Tennessee, USA)

Just trying to get some feedback on these lyrics to see where i need to go from here...all feedback welcome. I'm a vocalist who is tired of singing someone elses words and thought i'd trying putting some of my own down. Scary huh...lol Please let me know what you think.

I’m slipping away
We both know it’s true
Your grabbing in thin air
When there’s nothing left to cling to

So many thoughts
Swimming in your head
All drowning in this silence
Cause there’s nothing left to be said

So just, let me walk away
Don’t make it harder than it is
It’s been coming for a while
and you’re a better man than this
and it’s too late to fix
Wherever we went wrong
You can’t breathe life into
Something that’s dead and gone

I’m so tired
I can’t do this anymore
Watching you watching me
As I’m staring at the door

If it helps to watch me cry
I’ll listen while you plead
Drag me through your living hell
If you think that’s what you need



Then just let me walk away
Don’t make this harder than it is
There’s no turning back anymore
And I can’t change what already is
And it’s too late now to right
All the things that I did wrong
So baby please believe me
And let me go
Cause I’m already gone