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Alone Lyrics-Punk/Alternative/Grunge

by Gregory Alan Cotter II a.k.a. The Broken Child
(Dry Ridge, KY USA)

I've got over 50 written heres one i hope to get feedback on.

I close my eyes as I lay to sleep,
Thaughts fill my head as the lids grow heavy,
Everything goed dark for a little while,
And out of nowere i see your smile,
And the Darkness just fades away,
alone in my dreams i wanna stay,
Then one night your smiles a frown,
Can't face the music when you come around.

Alone Among the Faceless Crowd,
Singing a hymn of a run around,
Forgetting what you ever meant to me,
nightmares eclipse these happy dreams.
I'm all alone
Alone(x3)

Slowly my eyelids begin to lift again,
But i see your face and i begin,
To weep of sorrow feeling I knew
Would turn out this way once i saw you,
Why should it turn out this way?
When bad memories overcome our personalities,
we change into people we don't wanna be,
well that's what happend to me.

Alone among the faceless crowd,
singing a hymn of a run around,
Forgetting what you ever meant to me,
Nightmares eclipse these happy dreams.
and i'm all alone.
Alone(x3)

(Repeat Chorus)

I'll never forget what i said,
i'll still love you until the end.
But i'm all alone now,
Among the faceless crowd.
Forget me not in your dreams,
I'll be there, Don't worry,
Reach out past the light,
Baby i will hold you tight.

And we'll be alone.
Alone(x6)




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Alone Lyrics-Punk/Alternative/Grunge

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Jul 06, 2010
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by: Anonymous

GREAT SONG. IF I WAS A COMPANY. I'D BUY YOUR SONGS TO USE.

Aug 11, 2010
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by: Anonymous

Pretty good besides all the weak standard rhyming in the first few stanzas I would try to be more descriptive and maybe find some more creative rhyming pairs

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