ALL I HAD ---- punk lyrics critique

by Sanarchym
(New Zealand)

Punk rock type thing. Just the first verse and what I think might become a chorus. Be critical! please!

thanks.
Sanarchym
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I know I owed you, but I think youve been repayed
Now leave this place right here because your welcomes overstayed
Your debt, was a burden to me
Yeah I just couldnt shake it off - Couldnt shake you from my dreams
Now leave here, I'm spent cant you see.
Don't want you worrying for me

Singn'
I dont want you, ya see
Im sick of you caring for me
I wish I could stop all the dreams
And forget all the sweet memories

I HAD OF YOU