"All Eyes On You" :) - pop - lyric critique

by Danielle
(Alabama)

Heyyyyyy i am Danielle im 14. i wrote this song hoping it my be good. tell me anything that you would change about it. thanks :D

“All Eyes On You”

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You are naturally beautiful with
A blast of shimmer behind a shine.
No one is born to rule, don’t listen to
Them no matter how cruel they can be.
There is no such thing as perfect.
They are not even worth it.

It’s time to take control.
It’s time to let it go.

Walk in with your head held high.
Be bold with your style.
Wear a smile.
Find your beauty piece.
Show the world what you mean.
All eyes are on you.

When you’re strong you sparkle.
Beauty is inside you
If you are unique you stand out.
Be confident in yourself.
I just want you to be happy with yourself.

Ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Walk in with your head held high.
Be bold with your style.
Wear a smile.
Find your beauty piece.
Show the world what you mean.
All eyes are on you.

Live life, discover the world, know that
You are beautiful, and Make your dreams
Come true.

~All Eyes Are On You~