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All Alone- Ballad - Lyrics Feedback

by Emily Rogers
(England)

Here are some lyrics i wrote and i would love to hear some feedback. They have been influenced by a very hard point in my life, as you can probably tell.

(verse)
Life's not the same, still i carry on
There's an empty space now that you're gone
You should be here not free to roam
Why did you leave me all alone.

(chorus)
Leave me,
why'd you have to leave me living here alone
because now you are gone
And I miss you,
I miss you everyday and night

You were there then you were gone
I dont know how i could move on
You were the biggest part of my life for so long
and now you leave me all alone.

(chorus)
Leave me,
why'd you have to leave me living here alone
because now you are gone
And I miss you,
I miss you everyday and night

(bridge)
I need you now, more than ever before
Coz you are all i have, walk back through that door.

(chorus)
Leave me,
why'd you have to leave me living here alone
because now you are gone
And I miss you,
I miss you everyday and night




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All Alone- Ballad - Lyrics Feedback

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Sep 01, 2009
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:'(
by: MC

I could tell you were feeling it writing this, keep re-writing and see what you come up with. It's very good, and evokes sadness, very touching. :'(

Sep 02, 2009
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emotional
by: emzy

You are really talented! i can tell that you obviously really felt these lyrics and would be willing to buy them off you. i work for a rather large producition company and would love to put a melody to these lyrics!


Sep 03, 2009
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EXCELLENT
by: ANDYL- UK

Wishing u every success 4 the future. I think your work is excellent. Honesty is a vitue. The never employed as a lyric writer!!

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