a time to remember - lyrics critique

by talitha greer
(victoria point QLD)

hi guys this is the first song ive ever written it is only short but i need to know if it has potential it is all about a guy who I feel strongly for I've written many others about him but this was the first one and this song means alot to me bcause the guy is in jail

just some time ago I was so down
all I did was hope it would turn around
the sun was fading my world was falling
then you came into my life
it opened up a new door
and closed the one behind

the winds may change
the stars may fade
but I'll be stronger now

it's only you
it's only you

I'll close my eyes and lose the way
but you'll be the stars that guide my way
you're the only hope that keeps me going far
always be with me you're the only one
you're the only one I need