A little to late. Lyrics Critique- Love kinda song.

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A little to late. Lyrics Critique- Love kinda song.

by Katelyn
(FWB Fl)

A little late:
It’s the middle of summer
chilling with friends,
having a good ole time
you walked through those doors
like a wave hitting the shores
you took my breath away.
Chorus:
At the time
l like you
Your all I wanted
Time passed
I didn’t get over you fast
but eventually I did.
now you like me
you want to be
more then friends.
but, that’s just how it ends
being just friends.
Summers coming to an end
Schools back in

im not sure after that....

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A little to late. Lyrics Critique- Love kinda song.

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Aug 28, 2009
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why did you stop?
by: Charlie from Alabama

You had a pretty good start when i read it i could hear a rythem what happened . finish it never quit!!!!!!
This is how I read it

little late:

It’s the middle of summer
chilling out with friends,
having a good ole time
Then
When you came walking through those doors
It was like a wave hitting the shore

you
took my breath away.
yeah you took my breath away

Chorus:
At the time
l liked you
Your were all I ever wanted

Oct 07, 2009
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you had it
by: ras

summers comin to an end
school is back in
emotions change like seasons
i'll probably fall for you again
but the best for us right now
is nothing more than friends

something like that,lol

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