"7 digits" critique country pop

by c8
(US)

7 digits running through my head
I walk into my house
First thing
I grab a notebook and a pen

Then I realize I won’t have to write it down
Cause I’ll have it memorized like the colors of his eyes
And the song you sang to me
Instead of singing Mary Jane
You sang it with no hesitance my name

Chorus:

{The 6th month
The 12th day
7 digits
I will 4 ever remember
Since the 1st day
I saw your gorgeous eyes
You said with 3 rings you will pick up
But if it gets to the 6th just hang up
Call back at 8
And now there's 4 words I want to say if you answer your phone}

Mr. 612741 36 84
I’ll make a compromise I won’t give up for a no
Cause I’ve already have you stuck in my mind
Like the chorus to the song
You sang to me
And instead of singing Mary Jane
You sang my name
Like the color of your eyes and the smile that's stuck in my mind











Chorus:

{The 6th month
The 12th day
7 digits
I will 4 ever remember
Since the 1st day
I saw your gorgeous eyes
The last 3 numbers flow in my head
Like how when I see the number 68 I think of that maroon and black jersey
And how there are 4 words I want to say if you answer your phone}

Mr. 612 741 36 84
It’s the 6th month
The 12th day
I'm dialing 7 digits
That I will 4ever remember
Since the first day I told you my name
Its no longer the third ring
I tell myself I'll hang up after the 6th tone
If you don't answer your phone
Wondering if my clock is wrong and its not 8 o’clock
You answer after the 4th ring
I’m already singing gorgeous what's your name

Mr. 612 741 36 84
Mr. gorgeous eyes
Singing your song
Number 68 with that memorable
Smile looking back at me
Mr. 612 741 36 84
Gorgeous what’s your name?