15 Minutes (Rock, Grungy) - Songwriters Lyrics Review

by Damon
(Utah)

I am new to songwriting, but this song came to me, and I liked it. Its about my girlfriend who committed suicide.

(verse)
Don't you know what you have?
Death will not set you free
It will end your pain,
but not your misery.
The world is a Parasite,
It eats us from the inside out
Death will break you up,
and never set you free

(chorus)
It was only 15 minutes ago
when you were gone into the dark abyss
lost forever,
all we can do is dwell on the past
Try to move on,
but its not that simple
Now you can't feel love or joy
Forget the misery and painful memories
You can't laugh, love, feel, or forget

(verse)
I don't know if I can heal
You kept me alive all this time
And then you gave up without a fight
You hid your true intentions from the world
I look and look,
but the world just not like you
No one can be trusted anymore
Nothing can set me free
Not even death will do it for me

(chorus)
It was only 15 minutes ago
when you were gone into the dark abyss
lost forever,
all we can do is dwell on the past
Try to move on,
but its not that simple
Now you can't feel love or joy

(bridge)
I don't feed pain
I feel pain
Still I fear feeling rage
Teach me I'm not alive
Despite tolerance,
I will never find the world
So why do I wish
That everything is my fault
Fear with Pain
I found I am still alive
You won't be afraid
I am still a dangerous feed