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"**** your god", Lyrics Critique- Crust Punk

by Corey Paranoid
(MD)

Chorus
There's no such thing as holy
and there's no such thing as sacred
belief makes you a coward
So f*** your god

Christ never existed
he didn't die for your sins
belief makes you a coward
so f*** your god

Verse1:
Religion makes you weak
as you blindly follow a ficticious leader
giving hope and praise and thanx
to your so called great creater
scared to death of his vengful wrath
so give your infant a holy bath
don't blasphemize sacred beliefs
or on a pillow of clouds you'll never sleep
bloodsoaked wars are fought over
who belives in the right god
religion breeds murderous people
which shows that your gods a fraud
your pray for forgiveness after cheating on your wife
you make the rules and break the rules
what a contradictive life

Verse2:
you are all so f***ing wrong
none of you have it right
christians muslims and the jews
claim to have seen the light
you kill each other to prove a point
for which none have any proof
every war except a few
have religion at there root
from the child molesting priests
to the televangelists
they're all just spreading propaghanda
for they're religious army to enlist
the world will never be safe
as long as religion is around
bloody war upon bloody war
until it's six feet under ground


Tell me what ya think
if it offended you i'm sorry but we are all allowed to have our own opinions.




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"**** your god", Lyrics Critique- Crust Punk

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Feb 19, 2009
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Why so mad at religous belief?
by: Acoostic Zoo - Recording Studios Brisbane

Quote - "Tell me what ya think
if it offended you i'm sorry but we are all allowed to have our own opinions."

Here's my opinion.

It's people's beliefs and choices that inflict harm onto others. Can we blame guns or government for shootings/murders in our society or do we assign the blame to the person that committed the act?

I'm not stating the good or bad of Religon or that GOD does or doesn't exist.

Nevertheless, we can make choices that also benefit others.

There is no question as to the power of belief and it's influence on humanity. The choice is whether we make good or make bad.

Your lyrics well most definitely raise eye brows. It's confronting and challenging the good in religious belief.

Peace.
Acoostic Zoo - Recording Studios Brisbane
www.acoosticzoo.com

Mar 16, 2009
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by: kelsey[:

i thought it was great. and it didnt offend me at all, and it might be wrong to say this on here, but i believe there is no god. i guess by todays society, i would be classified under "Atheiest". but whatever, everyones entiltled to their own opinions, and that was yours.

wonderful job XD


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Mar 19, 2009
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by: Jack

Me being an athiest I can easily relate to this song. You got some good flow and I just think you are really straight up, I mean if thats your writin style thats great but I would personally recommend more metaphors. Example:

The cross I burn,
Students of the church will never learn,
Now rise congregation to a (profanity deleted by moderator: please keep this forum clean!) up nation,
Books of faith are a country of disgracin

something like that can help your flow and make it a deeper message. I like the anger released in your song, keep it up

Mar 19, 2009
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Athiests can be kind, you know
by: Anonymous

I agree with you on most points of your song and I'm not offended, but I just want to say christians have a right to their beliefs just as much as you do to yours so, yeah... That's pretty much it

Jan 14, 2011
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by: Anonymous

You must be really insecure. Nothing is to low for you is it? To actually write a song about how Christianity stinks? To make assumptions without knowing anything? at all? Why so against islam, jews and christians? I think it would be kind of depressing to believe that this is all there is. Don't you want something more? Don't you WANT to believe that there is a purpose for your life? Don't you WANT to believe that you can make a difference? That someone will always be with you and never let you down? Just throwing out some questions there. I think that you should know that everybody thinks THEY know better. Frankly, mankind is stupid. And even if there is no god, don't you WANT to believe that someone cares about you? Don't you think that the Jews and Christians would have to know what that "something more" is to be persecuted for their faith like they are? Millions of Jews were KILLED in WWII and yet they didn't convert to Hitler's belief. Would they choose to DIE if they KNEW that what they believed was a lie? Christians don't think they know everything. NO ONE DOES. Neither do you. So think about what you believe. Are you absolutely positive that YOU are right and everyone else is wrong? Are you sure there can't be multiple truths? Or can there be only one? Or is there any truth? Think about it. Hopefully you will come to a different conclusion than that the world is a horrible place and everyone should just kill themselves and end it right now. Cuz how fun is THAT to believe????

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